Thursday, 26 May 2016
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Good poem Nelly. Next time can you include something about it so I know what it is about.
ReplyDeleteWow Nelly Nice job!
ReplyDeleteTo be honest your like a true author I really love yr poem
Next time you can be more creative and add more cool things around the background
Wow man!
Hello Nelly I really like the way you did your poem. I really like the way you did your poem I thought that it was really spectacular, I also liked the way you involved nature. How did you come up with the poem and all the details.
ReplyDeleteHey Nelly,
ReplyDeleteI really like how you set out your Poetry and how you used specific words i really enjoyed reading it great job.How long did it take you to write this poem?
2 days
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