Thursday, 12 May 2016
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I really enjoyed the way you did you lay out good job maybe you could do it to a smaller size to fit the page
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ReplyDeleteHi Nelly,
ReplyDeleteNice Character web on Roland.
It is really sad how he didn't have much friends.
I like all the bright colours in this.
What was the story name?
Bye.
Hey nelly great job,I really like how u set your work it's vey creative but next time you should make everything smaller but not to small just try to keep everything fit in the page.
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