Writing

WALT… To write descriptive paragraphs

	Where	What happened
Topic	Down the road next to a building called fi´zi:r	Numerous and scads of people were lined up observing the bicyclist and me prepare.
Top	It was 28 degrees the  sweltering hot sun burning against my cerise face.	Made me sweat even though we hadn't even started.My blue vest and skins made me feel ike i was in a pit of lava
Middle	People in the apartment watched us prepare for our race.	The race is starting
Conclusion	Time to prepare	Cyclist assemble at the back

Down the road next to a brown building called fi´zi:rR.Numerous and scads of people were lined up observing the bicyclist and me prepare. It was 28 degrees the  sweltering hot sun burning against my cerise face.Made me sweat,even though we hadn't even started.My blue vest and skins made me feel like i was in a pit of lava, people in the apartment watched us prepare for our race.Cyclist begin to assemble at the back.I wore my sunglasses, and put on the helmet for protection.

Clenching my fist amd palms into a ball of round rocks on the bike handle, i allowed all my anger on the bike.1,2,3 the horn shrieked the sound was deafening and antagonizing, i peddled with all my strength my fibula was weakening, after a few minutes my heart began to throb like a stereo.I was incapacitate by a heartburn and indigestion on my way i fainted, the weather was like being locked in a car with a heater in it it was to hot.